'Asked if a free transfer is an option, Hockaday said: “That’s up to the powers that be but we’re getting him in, having a look and the lad is doing everything that’s been asked of him.” '
Conjunction not preceded by a comma; correct use of the apostrophe - thrice; every word spelt correctly!
As your use of the colon doesn't precede a list, I would have thought it correct that "totally" should have a capital letter.
Why this place is frequented by smart arses, when the reason for discussion is CCFC, I find baffling. Do you think we will all bow down to your superior knowledge at picking holes in a local rag (which is after all Mirror Group - what did you expect?) or are you simply a c**t?
'Asked if a free transfer is an option, Hockaday said: “That’s up to the powers that be but we’re getting him in, having a look and the lad is doing everything that’s been asked of him.” '
Conjunction not preceded by a comma; correct use of the apostrophe - thrice; every word spelt correctly!