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Warwickhunt

Warwickhunt

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I saw the Pollar Bear Man he kept farting all the way up the steps to his seat
 
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Huckerby

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Again a really good bit of writing. Unfortunately can't say I enjoyed reading it

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Gazolba

Gazolba

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Good account, which I could actually read this time. Congratulations.
Although blue or black on white or cream would have been easier on the eyes than white on black.
When did you last read a book with black pages and white text?
I skipped the entire long first paragraph as it appeared completely irrelevant.
The best part was the report on the replacement linesman's antics.
 
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Silsden

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Excellent read as always, try and find a font that will annoy Gazolba more, as I found his critique completely irrelevant :p
 
Otis

Otis

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I want big black letters, all in capitals!

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87mint

87mint

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If you're looking for a completely 'relevant' match report then this one definitely isn't for you.
 
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usskyblue

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87mint said:
If you're looking for a completely 'relevant' match report then read matty roper's and give me a bell when you flat line
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To be honest, for me, it was like reading riddles, like you're trying too hard to wax lyrical. Perhaps you should consider being a little more 'relevant', rather than knocking it.
 
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87mint

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Since waxing lyrical means praising, I get the feeling you didn't read it at all....,
 
usskyblue

usskyblue

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87mint said:
Since waxing lyrical means praising, I get the feeling you didn't read it at all....,
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You're either offended or selective...you missed 'trying too hard'.

Don't get me wrong, it isn't bad. When you're 'playing with words', don't lose focus on the subject matter.

Just an opinion.
 
usskyblue

usskyblue

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87mint said:
If you're looking for a completely 'relevant' match report then this one definitely isn't for you.
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Wise edit.......it's late in the UK anyway, not many, if any, will have seen your original comment.

Unfortunately, since I already quoted it....it will stick.

So, as you'd word play; Mum isn't the word.

Bummer

Your only hope is that they can't be arsed to look back ;)
 
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Rodders1

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Jesus there's some lovely comments on here. Great read as usual. And for those that didn't appreciate it ...... I look forward to reading your masterpiece's.
 
usskyblue

usskyblue

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He was (unfairly) less than complimentary about someone else's blog. Which is always ill advised when your own isn't perfect.

He edited it, so fair play to him.
 
Joy Division

Joy Division

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Can't see where he's been less than complimentary about another blog TBF TBH
 
usskyblue

usskyblue

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Kudos for putting it right.

Your writing is good, it's entertaining, so-much-so that it's even a good read after a shitty loss.

I know it's a blog, but if you want to take it further, a good article has a mix of facts and scene setting/story telling. I have a contact at the Guardian, one of their sports journalists. If I see one of your blogs that I think he might like, I'll send it to him, with your blessing of course.
 
lifeskyblue

lifeskyblue

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Another excellent piece. I'm just waiting to read your contribution when we next win. Please please be soon


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