Feedback on Advert (1 Viewer)

[Nick]

Following on from the flyer, have had an advert made.

[video=youtube;Ta6Sr17jEPQ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ta6Sr17jEPQ[/video]

Any feedback?

 

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[wingy]

ISc Debbie a Ging .

all good nick ,apart from seeming a tad long??

 

[Nick]

It is a bit longer than normal to cram all of the benefits in

 

[harvey098]

Very good nick!

 

[Nick]

Any other feedback?

 

[mds]

Probably a minute longer than it needs to be, way too much unnecesary filler, she dosnt need any secrets, dont need to know she`s missing out, nor about her friend, nor the list of named stores top brands would do, a lot i would change (take out) but thats me, right idea just too long.

 

[mds]

I just had a look at the site, didnt enter a search term just hit enter, got a pop up to enter 2 char. or more but it wouldnt go away it covered the search box so i couldnt see what i had typed then even with what looked like 5 or 6 random letters wouldnt respond had to reload the page.



Latest firefox with addblock plus!

 

[Nick]

I just had a look at the site, didnt enter a search term just hit enter, got a pop up to enter 2 char. or more but it wouldnt go away it covered the search box so i couldnt see what i had typed then even with what looked like 5 or 6 random letters wouldnt respond had to reload the page.

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Latest firefox with addblock plus!

Cheers, that's the old site so it's getting ready to launch a new version

 

[blueflint]

spot on nick very good

 

[Rusty Trombone]

Looks good, very professional. Where are you planning the ad will be seen, will there be a shorter version as well?

 

[jon92]

Looks good mate. Abit to much information though needs to be broken down into separate parts and a minute long max