You can view the page at http://www.skybluestalk.co.uk/content/108-contracts-to-be-or-not-to-be
You asked for comments so brace yourself (sorry in advance!) ...
I'm not advocating the grammar police should be able to criticise on this open forum like this (we were down that road on here a few weeks back and it got quite heated with unnecessary stuff from both sides), but I think in article it has to be much better than that. I know it's your first offering but if you accept constructive criticism then you will not be upset at this, but look to improve and double check.
As for the content, well it's not really saying much and is about almost a week out of date now and something that we are all aware of. It's written no better than just a normal thread on here and includes some unfounded speculation as we have nothing to suggest that Leicester is even a viable option for Westwood so no need to mention them.
I'm also not sure how valid those contract offers are since as far as I know we can't officially offer contracts to players whilst a transfer embargo remains in place although I'm not 100% on this.
Sorry if it sounds a bit harsh and as you say it is your first effort. If I'm being kind 3/10 for me
'Carried away' rather than rushed?
IM sorry, for me Marlon King (jamaican) should not even be in this country after the recent prison spell , and although you can make a mistake, this is NOT his first brush with the law for violence.
Im a bit ashamed we took him , i know he scored goals but as I work in Law enforcement it leaves a bad taste and as a Jamaican national I have no idea how he has not been deported.
what is an embargo?
IM sorry, for me Marlon King (jamaican) should not even be in this country after the recent prison spell , and although you can make a mistake, this is NOT his first brush with the law for violence.
Im a bit ashamed we took him , i know he scored goals but as I work in Law enforcement it leaves a bad taste and as a Jamaican national I have no idea how he has not been deported.